She was fat.so she wanted lose weight. she has went jogging since a year ago. she seldom ate fast food. she always eats vegetable every day. she was exerised every day. If she lose weight. she were very happy. Hope she can lose weight successfully.
Hi~ 1. She was fat.so she wanted lose weight. → She was fat, so she wanted to lose weight. 2. she has went jogging since a year ago. → She has gone jogging for one year. 3. she seldom ate fast food. → she seldom eats fast food. 4. If she lose weight. she were very happy. Hope she can lose weight successfully. → If she loses weight, she will be very happy. Hopefully, she can lose weight successfully.
Hi~
回覆刪除1. She was fat.so she wanted lose weight.
→ She was fat, so she wanted to lose weight.
2. she has went jogging since a year ago.
→ She has gone jogging for one year.
3. she seldom ate fast food.
→ she seldom eats fast food.
4. If she lose weight. she were very happy. Hope she can lose weight successfully.
→ If she loses weight, she will be very happy.
Hopefully, she can lose weight successfully.